Rewrite the following text samples below to make them more user-friendly. This requires that you write in a professiona
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Rewrite the following text samples below to make them moreuser-friendly. This requires that you write in a professionalwriting style (clearly, concisely and completely) in sentences andparagraphs.
1. Conference: Emphasis was placed on near shore waters, coastalwetlands, land by the lakes, the impact of changing land use, andinformation availability and management. For each conference anintegration paper was prepared for participants, bringing all thetopics together. Also for both conferences indicators were chosenand, based on expert opinions, subjective assessments were providedas to conditions in terms of good, fair, poor, etc.
2. Lead in Water: Infants and children who drink watercontaining lead in excess of the action level could experiencedelays in their physical or mental development. Children could showslight deficits in attention span and learning abilities. Adultswho drink this water over many years could develop kidney problemsor high blood pressure.
3. Protect Yourself from Natural Disasters: Mitigation is thecornerstone of emergency management. It’s the ongoing effort tolessen the impact disasters have on people’s lives and propertythrough damage prevention and flood insurance. Through measuressuch as, building safely within the floodplain or removing homesaltogether; engineering buildings and infrastructures to withstandearthquakes: and creating and enforcing effective building codes toprotect property from floods, hurricanes and other natural hazards,the impact on lives and communities is lessened.
4. Car Safety: This is a multipurpose passenger vehicle whichwill handle and maneuver differently from an ordinary passengercar, in driving conditions which may occur on streets and highwaysand off road. As with other vehicles of this type, if you makesharp turns or abrupt maneuvers, the vehicle may roll over or maygo out of control and crash. You should read driving guidelines andinstructions in the Owner’s Manual, and WEAR YOUR SEAT BELTS AT ALLTIMES.
5. Shopping in a Korean Grocery Store: Tip: Use information fromthe textbook on writing for a global audience. Korean grocerystores can be kind of confusing, especially if you can’t readKorean. Even if you speak Korean, there are plenty of tips andtricks for picking the best ingredients off the shelf. Choosingfruits and vegetables and reading packages is not always easy! Hereis a series to help you shop in a Korean grocery store, step bystep. There's a ton of great information for choosing rice,produce, soy sauces, pastes, spices, noodles, powders, grains,beans, seaweed, frozen items, dried fish, fermented seafood, ricecakes, tofu & Korean kitchenware.
1. Conference: Emphasis was placed on near shore waters, coastalwetlands, land by the lakes, the impact of changing land use, andinformation availability and management. For each conference anintegration paper was prepared for participants, bringing all thetopics together. Also for both conferences indicators were chosenand, based on expert opinions, subjective assessments were providedas to conditions in terms of good, fair, poor, etc.
2. Lead in Water: Infants and children who drink watercontaining lead in excess of the action level could experiencedelays in their physical or mental development. Children could showslight deficits in attention span and learning abilities. Adultswho drink this water over many years could develop kidney problemsor high blood pressure.
3. Protect Yourself from Natural Disasters: Mitigation is thecornerstone of emergency management. It’s the ongoing effort tolessen the impact disasters have on people’s lives and propertythrough damage prevention and flood insurance. Through measuressuch as, building safely within the floodplain or removing homesaltogether; engineering buildings and infrastructures to withstandearthquakes: and creating and enforcing effective building codes toprotect property from floods, hurricanes and other natural hazards,the impact on lives and communities is lessened.
4. Car Safety: This is a multipurpose passenger vehicle whichwill handle and maneuver differently from an ordinary passengercar, in driving conditions which may occur on streets and highwaysand off road. As with other vehicles of this type, if you makesharp turns or abrupt maneuvers, the vehicle may roll over or maygo out of control and crash. You should read driving guidelines andinstructions in the Owner’s Manual, and WEAR YOUR SEAT BELTS AT ALLTIMES.
5. Shopping in a Korean Grocery Store: Tip: Use information fromthe textbook on writing for a global audience. Korean grocerystores can be kind of confusing, especially if you can’t readKorean. Even if you speak Korean, there are plenty of tips andtricks for picking the best ingredients off the shelf. Choosingfruits and vegetables and reading packages is not always easy! Hereis a series to help you shop in a Korean grocery store, step bystep. There's a ton of great information for choosing rice,produce, soy sauces, pastes, spices, noodles, powders, grains,beans, seaweed, frozen items, dried fish, fermented seafood, ricecakes, tofu & Korean kitchenware.