The first 10 sentences you should rewrite as vividly as you can; hype up the emotion, the imagery; don't change the esse
Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2022 8:54 am
The first 10 sentences you should rewrite as vividly as you can;
hype up the emotion, the imagery; don't change the essential facts,
but make us feel it!
Be as creative as you want. Use a thesaurus to find
alternative nouns and verbs ; look up
various adjectives and adverbs to make the
images more vivid. Feel free to rearrange the order of the
sentence.
There’s no right or wrong here, only effort; but be sure to
double-check the meanings of words you choose to use; some have
unexpected layers.
Have fun! Amuse us!
1. Each Sunday for 2 months the women met in the woods.
2. Protesters walked through the town chanting.
3. Football supporters ran toward the field.
4. The patient asked for a glass of water.
5. Buy clothes from our summer collection.
6. People blame woman after her cellphone is stolen.
7. November began with snow.
8. The garden bloomed.
9. Mayor signs tax bill.
10. Dinner is served.
These last 5 sentences you should strip down to be less emotive;
simplify and rewrite them so there are only the facts, ma’am; no
opinions, no biased/emotive language.
And always remember: If you don’t know what a word means, LOOK
IT UP!
11. Social media is taking over the entire planet.
12. Chaos ensues as political mob erupts in riots.
13. She wolfed down every crumb on her plate.
14. Ornery lawyer slams astonished Governor with petty
third-degree.
15. Exhausted children suffer through piles of homework.
hype up the emotion, the imagery; don't change the essential facts,
but make us feel it!
Be as creative as you want. Use a thesaurus to find
alternative nouns and verbs ; look up
various adjectives and adverbs to make the
images more vivid. Feel free to rearrange the order of the
sentence.
There’s no right or wrong here, only effort; but be sure to
double-check the meanings of words you choose to use; some have
unexpected layers.
Have fun! Amuse us!
1. Each Sunday for 2 months the women met in the woods.
2. Protesters walked through the town chanting.
3. Football supporters ran toward the field.
4. The patient asked for a glass of water.
5. Buy clothes from our summer collection.
6. People blame woman after her cellphone is stolen.
7. November began with snow.
8. The garden bloomed.
9. Mayor signs tax bill.
10. Dinner is served.
These last 5 sentences you should strip down to be less emotive;
simplify and rewrite them so there are only the facts, ma’am; no
opinions, no biased/emotive language.
And always remember: If you don’t know what a word means, LOOK
IT UP!
11. Social media is taking over the entire planet.
12. Chaos ensues as political mob erupts in riots.
13. She wolfed down every crumb on her plate.
14. Ornery lawyer slams astonished Governor with petty
third-degree.
15. Exhausted children suffer through piles of homework.