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a. Using the synergies amongst our competitors,
we can formulate a program that not only capitalizes on the
strengths of each of our respective constituencies but that raises
the bar to a new level for each and every one of us.
b. At the end of the day, we need to think
outside the box to look for low- hanging fruit, or we’ll never
reach our end goal.
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c. To stimulates sales, Apple is lowering prices
substantially on its line of electronic items. Sometime soon, it
will ship out to most of its stores various electronic accessories
to hand out to select lucky customers as a promotion for the sale.
Markdowns will range from very little on its MacBook line to a
great deal on certain iPod devices. Apple plans to reply on
internet marketing to let people know of these price reductions. In
particular, it is considering using a popular celebrity to
publicize the new pricing strategy.